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Review:Carolynn says:
Hello, I'm here with your requested review! Sorry it took awhile, the length didn't fit with the amount of time I had.
It didn't captured my attention right off the bat but it made me wanted to know want happened next.

The characters are good, we don't know them that well yet since it's the first chapter.

Since this is about three different people's point of views you should seperate them like, C1 blah blah blah then C2 blah blah blah as it can confuse the reader. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Well it was the prologue which is why they were all in the same chapter. I do plan on making them hav different chapters =)

Thanks for reviewing!

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