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Review:missclaire17 says:
hello! I have to say that I've always seen this story but never read it till now, and I'm glad that I read it! I think you wrote this SO well; I just love the idea that the entire Wotter gang, the Scamanders, and Scorpius are a part of this secret criminal group. And the roles that each of them have is just so realistic and I love how all of them do have this really strong bond together with each other.

The thing is though, I really think that Hugo is the traitor. As sad as it is to have to pick someone out in the group as the traitor, I have to say that its Hugo. as much as Rose does not want to believe that her brother can be the traitor, I think that he is because of how suspicious it is.

Also, I hope Draco and Astoria don't still think that Scorpius is dead. Hopefully because they can't produce his body they'll realize that he isn't dead and have hope.

I also don't know what to make of Zach. His character seems dodgy and even though Rose wants Scorpius to believe her and trust her on Zach, I think Scorpius is right to be wary about him. It doesnt matter that he had helped her out at the trial; he could be doing it for his own/the frat's reasons. Just because he helped her out once doesn't make him completely trustworthy.

I love how you wrote out Rose's character because she's SO flawed but at the same time, you can see her cling to this wish of naivety for things to go back to the way they were when it was good. I love to see that even though she's such a flawed person and she doesn't seem very likable at times, she has this goodness deep down inside of her and she has that goodness that Hermione believes Rose has to do the right thing at the very end.

I love this novel, and I hope you update soon (:

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