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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello there dear!

I must say, I'm really impressed with the first chapter. It's always challenging to write in a first person POV and you managed to do it justice!

I love Tonks as you pictured her here and she is a really relatable character. She is so real and down to Earth that you just instantly like her.

I also loved her meeting with Remus. I had a Tonks/Remus plunny a while back and it never actually saw the light of day but it did involve her falling down and him catching her! So that just makes me love this even more!

I know I sound like a fangirl, but everything about this first chapter was just so right. The way in which she studies those around her, her reaction to meeting Sirius and the rest of the Order, the dialogue and just the general mood and setting of this story! Your writting style is very good, you have a very good grasp of what's going on with and around your characters and it shows when you write it down for all of us to see! I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes!

Good luck and re-request when you update!


Author's Response: Hi Ral!

I'm glad that you liked the first person POV, I actually find it easier than third, as I like writing internal monologues ;D

I'm really glad that you loved Tonks, and that she was down to earth, as I was little worried I had made her too eccentric, so I'm glad that wasn't the case :D

Hahaha I couldn't have them not meet without Tonks falling on him, it wouldn't be right!

I don't mind if you sound like a fangirl, it's nice to know that you liked it! I'm glad that you liked her meeting with Sirius, and the Order meeting, as those parts were probably the ones I was most unsure of.

I'm so glad that you couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes, as those always seem to be a CC ;)

Thank you for this wonderful review, and I'll make sure to re-request!

-Kiana :D

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