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Review:Hope's Mom says:
James is going to be so upset! Sirius is right, however. Albus' sorting isn't about James. It's about Albus and where he belongs. I loved Amy and her interactions with both James and Dominique. How funny that she totally misunderstood James (and his rather insensitive comments) about her being a fish out of water. She will give him a hard time and he will deserve it. I really liked the Sirius/Neville conversation at the beginning. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, Jame's reaction is going to be a main focus in the next chapter. But you're right, James isn't going to be too happy.

Sirius had a very good part in this chapter, because he was in both James' and Al's shoes before and he has a little more insight than James does. That's one of the reasons I picked his point of view - instead of James' for this chapter. Plus I wanted to explain why Sirius went away and give that a little more.

Amy is very interesting for me right now - because I wasn't sure what to do with her at first. I think I have more of an idea now, but it should be fun. I'm glad that you like her interaction with James and Dom. She did misunderstand him and I think James isn't use to really being challenged like that - twice in one day too. Boy, it's just a rough day for him...Poor James.

Everyone seems to like Sirius and Neville so I'm glad. They are going to be having a few more conversations so I guess that's good. :)

Thank you so much! The next chapter will be out as soon a possible. :D


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