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Review:Hope's Mom says:
Wow - James is every bit the evil older sibling, isn't he? I have to admit I was not much better. I loved Al's line, "Well it's working. I'm completely freaked out now." I was able to read the next chapter before reviewing this one and now in the reread I understand so much more. Amy is here (I didn't know her the first time I read this) and I understand Sirius' twitches (also why he is so tired). Dom may join Al in Sytherin but I can't see Rose there. I look forward to seeing how these other two are sorted. Great chapter. Thank you!

Author's Response: I'm actually really glad that you read the next chapter and linked all those little things together like that. :) It makes me so happy and I think reading them all a once like you did might help for chapters like these, because I tend to note small things like that with the next chapter in mind. :)

I wouldn't call it evil...well maybe...Haha, It's the way James shows his brotherly love - in the most roundabout way possible. :D

But I liked that line too. I think it about summed up Al's feelings at the moment. :)

You are right - Amy wasn't really introduced in this chapter. Her name was called, but not as much was known about her until the next one.

I like your insight about Dom and Rose, it's very interesting. Their outcome will be in the next chapter - but it won't be as highlighted as Al's was. There will be a part about them though. :)

You're welcome once again and thank you! :) I'm glad that you liked it.

Taz

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