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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! I was so excited to see that you'd added another chapter!

I think this hospital scene felt really well done. I can't imagine what it would be like to wake up to that kind of news. Especially when you can't completely remember at first, and then everything is trying to down play the seriousness of it.

I loved that Dom seemed really, truly angry. I think that in her situation, sadness wouldn't even come through without the anger. Her lashing out on her family felt incredibly well done. As well as he resisting the things they told her to try and calm her.

I have to say I was really sad when she talked about Remus so cruelly, but all of the things she said were true. And it's not like she had too much control over her own words right now. I just hope she didn't hurt Teddy's feelings too much. I'm excited to see her sort of open back up to them and for her to let them comfort her. At least she's surrounded by people that have known a werewolf and understand, so she'll have an idea of what to expect!

Her stumbling across the memories in the pensive was a really interesting addition. Maybe they'll use that when she calms down a bit to show her more if Remus than that side? She definitely won't have it as terribly as Remus, since with the years that have passed I'm sure Wolfsbane is more readily available. But again, she wouldn't be thinking about any of this right now. I loved that you made sure to keep her thoughts so focused on the terribleness of the situation. It really felt realistic.

At first I wondered why you didn't include something with Bill telling Dom about his own attack and reminding her that he was okay and she will be too, even if he didn't turn into a full werewolf. But then I thought about it and realized that telling her about the creature that attacked him, when she's going to be one of those creatures herself, probably would have only made things much worse. So then it made perfect sense on why he didn't mention it!

Another lovely chapter, Angie!

Author's Response: Hey again! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked the hospital scene, I wasn't too sure whether it was done okay or not.

Yes, I always thought that anger and hysteria would settle in before sadness in Dom's situation. I am glad you found it all done well.

Aw *hug* I am sorry if I made you sad, but yes it was all true. She'll regret it later though, and you'll see more of Teddy's feelings in the next chapter. It will take some time for her to open up but she will =)

Hmm I didn't think of using the pensive to show Remus' other side, but it is a fine idea and I might just play with it. Thanks! We'll see more on her transformation and stuff in the (very) later chapters. I am pleased you found it all realistic.

Yes indeed. Imagine listening to your father tell you that a creature which you have become attacked him and left him scars - it just makes it all worse.

Thanks for your lovely review! Sorry for the delay in replying!

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