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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there - thanks for re-requesting, as I love this story so much! I wish I could've gotten around to reading more sooner, but I just don't seem to have as much time as I'd like for reading and reviewing fanfiction. Sob.

Anyway, this chapter was everything I was hoping it would be. I think Freya and Louis' parents reactions were absolutely perfect, and I liked the contrast between them, too. Though it was clear Bill and Fleur still disapproved of what had happened, they weren't outright horrible and at least showed support for their son, which was great to see. I also want to say that I loved your characterization of Fleur in this. She was definitely a lot more mature, sophisticated and grown up than she was in the books but there is definitely something of young Fleur still there, too, which is cool to see.

Oooh, Freya's parents, especially her father, are not particularly pleasant people, are they? In saying that, I would definitely like to know more about them. Why does her father act the way he does? And why doesn't her mother stand up for her? What does she really think? Though I don't really like her parents at this stage, I definitely think they add a very interesting dynamic towards the story - it is definitely important that there is some strong antagonism towards the pregnancy.

I actually like the fact that Freya is going to have to be homeschooled. Not because I want she and Louis to be apart (they are so cute together) but because it would make absolutely no sense for a pregnant teenager to stay at Hogwarts, and you have definitely covered that in this chapter, so good on you! I also loved Flitwick in this chapter. He was a little bit awkward, which I found quite amusing.

Anyway, this was another awesome chapter - nice work!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're liking the story so much :D That's okay hun about not having time.

I'm glad that it's everything you wanted it to be, and that you like Bill and Fleur, Ted and Diane's reactions. Bill and Fleur are definately the best parents and being supportive unlike Freya's parents.
Yay, so happy that you like my Fleur, I was worried that I wasn't going to pull it off and people would find her too non canon.

Yeah they're not nice people, I'm not a fan of Ted, I think that he just wants what's best for his daughter, but only thinks he can get it from threats and being angry and controlling. I'll have to dig deeper into the whole Ted thing and explain him more :D

I'm glad that you like that she's going to be homeschooled, it didn't make sense to me to have her staying at Hogwarts as I thought it would be too difficult for her to be there. But it is sad that she's not with Louis and her friends.

Thank you for reviewing!! :D


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