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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

I absolutely love the mood of this story. It is so unbelievably dark and mysterious and even slightly creepy. At the moment, I have absolutely no idea 'who dunnit' which I guess is credit to you, for keeping the mystery alive! At the beginning of this chapter, my suspicions started going towards Barty for some reason...but now I'm not so sure.

Speaking of Barty, I really liked your characterization of him in this chapter. Something about him - probably his attitude towards investigating the death - completely reminded me of the Barty from the books. The Barty that was obsessed with catching killers. I especially liked the line about Barty sounding saner that usual.

I think one of my favourite bits about this chapter were the subtle descriptions and imagery, especially at the beginning of the chapter. You really have this talent for conveying the mood to the audience through descriptions, and really painting a picture on our minds. even your description of the empty fireplace gave me a little shiver up my spine - it felt very foreboding.

The depth of your characters is great. I loved that this chapter was generally from Sirius' point of view, and I loved that we found out more about his thoughts and feelings about the death. I also like the little glimpses and mentions we got of the other Black family members, making the mystery even more puzzling and intriguing.

Overall, this was a great chapter.
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for dropping by!

I'm so glad you like the story - and I'm really, really happy you have no idea 'who dunnit', haha! Barty, hm? Ah, well, I can't really say anything ;)

I really love Barty as a character - I've always found him interesting! He's slightly insane, and really clever. He's definitely obsessed, I guess, haha.

Thank you! I love description and including it, but I'm always worried about writing too much, so I try to limit myself in that sense, so I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much! :)

Again, thank you so much! I love all of the characters so much, so I really try to do them justice and I'm so happy you think I haven't let any of them down!

Thank you so so much for this review, I really loved it; reading it makes me so happy! :)

Aph xx


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