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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Heyy!! Here I'm w the late review swap :P

Ahh! We finally get to know Mikaela a little better! Yayy!! One thing I noticed about her is that she really understands her parents' past. I love that you included Draco's past as a Death Eater as a part of her character since he can't completely get rid of that part of his life. Its not going to just disappear.

One CC I have is that the writing can be a little inconsistent at times. For example, right after she runs out of gas, and she's looking for money, she keeps changing her mind and by introducing so many ideas at the same time, the reader feels kinda overwhelmed.

Maybe add some detail and move some of the ideas to somewhere else to space it out?

This is a great chapter! Im glad I read it =) Thank you for the review swap!

Author's Response: Heyy, yes I will bear that in mind. Thankyou once again!
Em


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