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Review:Nicte says:
This, my friend, has to be the most angstyly-romantic thing I have ever read.

The description of Draco's (at least I think that's him) feelings were absolutely stunning. What he saw, what he felt, incredible. I was clinging to every word and was not able to stop reading until it was over.

Even when we don't know much about Jasmine, you take the reader to actually feel sorry for Draco's loss, and even a little about her being tortured like that; I can't say that I felt sorry for her dying, but I did felt relieved that she did, cause that ended her suffering.

Anyway, I believe that the way that you used the curse was definitely spectacular, especially since Bellatrix used it as some sort of initiation for Draco to get the Mark.

To finish my rant, I have to say, this is a STUNNING piece and it goes directly to my favourites and I loved every little piece of it.


-- Andrea.

Author's Response: Hi Andrea! Thank you so much for your review! This actually was not Draco, but rather just a "faceless" soon to be death eater. But if you saw him as Draco, that's great too! I left him like that just so that you could picture him anyway you wanted! Once again, I am so glad you liked it, your review totally made my day! :)


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