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Review:ValWitch21 says:
BABY HARRY &hearts Can I steal him? Please? PLEASE?

I know I've been grumbling about sad this story makes me, so I'm going to enthuse about how happy this chapter made me. Yes, I know, they know about the traitor. It's probably all going to be blamed on Beth.

BUT. The group interactions were adorable (why, Peter, why?). Lily and James and Beth were adorable. REMUS -- I wish we'd see more of him.

And I shouldn't say this -- I cannot believe my brain for thinking this -- but I just held up a tiny Siribeth flag. A tiny one, I swear! So small you can only see it if you get up really close and squint. BUT STILL, I CANNOT BELIEVE MYSELF. YOU ARE A MANIPULATIVE PERSON. I was always a huge Sneth shipper and now I'm sort of hoping for Siribeth. *wears hat of shame*

No, Val, focus. SNETHSNETHSNETH. There, that much has been cleared up.

Whoops, this review has essentially been me talking to myself. Heh. I'm sorry.

This was such a good chapter, I adored every moment of it! I can't wait until next week &hearts

Author's Response: Isn't baby Harry adorable? ♥ I wrote him into every single scene I thought he could fit into, just because of how much I wanted to write about all the adorable things I'm sure he did as a baby.

I'm glad this chapter could make you happy. :) This story is a little bit depressing -- justifiably so, I do think -- but I wanted to lighten it up with something like this, a mostly-happy birthday celebration (aside from Moody being weird, I guess). Remus is being kept out of the picture for a reason; you'll learn why later in the story!

Haha, it's all right to continue shipping Siribeth! I MAY be sprinkling hints here and there just for you folk, still hoisting flags for that ship. :3 I really am a manipulative person, and quite cruel. I have no qualms about saying so! ♥ But then, I am forever a Severus/Beth shipper... if you can ship your own ship, that is.

Thank you so much for your punctual and lovely reviews, Val. And I'm seriously SO glad you're continuing to enjoy Breaking Even! Thank you for reviewing!!


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