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Review:marauder5 says:
This chapter was really great. Getting an inside look on the Grotta was intriguing, and I really hope we'll get to see a bit more of what I guess is your version of hell. It was perfect, and I loved that little touch of having people who are 'mentally dead' be ghosts of this world, like Barty Crouch or the Longbottoms.

And the contenders, finally! I can't wait to see how the Races will go. I also really hope that we'll get more of an explanation as to why Pettigrew ended up in Cliodna's Clock rather than the Grotta.

I'm a bit confused about James' motive to sign up. Was it because Pettigrew was in, or because Snape was?

I guess Fred and Cedric want to see their families, right? And maybe Colin too. Well, I guess I'll have to keep reading. I think that this is my favorite story on this site, and I'm so glad to have found it. Great job! ;)

Author's Response: I was excited to show what the Grotta looked like on the inside. The interesting thing about it, though, is that it's not really the equivalent of hell. There are people in there who probably shouldn't be in there (Walburga, for example, who was undeniably nasty in life but not bad enough to warrant this kind of harsh fate), just like there are those who slipped through the cracks and ended up in Cliodna's Clock (Igor, Peter, Salazar, etc.). It's not divine selection that assigns people to where they'll end up, as you'll see eventually. There are things about Cliodna's Clock that are not quite right. ;)

You'll see more about James later! And you'll hear his motivations for entering. Everyone's motives are different, and some aren't known. You'll get to see why certain people entered and with others, they more or less keep that information to themselves.

Your favorite story on this site?! :O You seriously do not know how floored I am to hear that. There's so many awesome stories on HPFF, so it feels nothing short of wonderful that you should think highly of mine.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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