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Review:atellam says:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Ahh, Jily. My babies. I love them so much. They make my heart melt and I want nothing more than to find my own personal James Potter. *swoon*

This one-shot was great. Not only because Jily, but because flying in front of a bludger for someone else is such a James thing to do (in my opinion anyway) and I feel you got his characterization spot on. Lily's adorable with her blushing and lip biting and this story was totally brilliant. I wish it was longer and we found out what happens at the party (although I have an inkling :P )

Ah, I just can't get over my Jily babies.

Wonderful one-shot. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. ^_^

- Adele. ^_^

Author's Response: Hello!!

Thank you so much for leaving me a birthday review!! I appreciate it :) I'm also really sorry for how long it's taken for me to respond to this review!

I love James/Lily too!! I could just sit and read them all the time &hearts

To hear you say the characterisation was good is such a relief! I can't even tell you. It's my one greatest fear when writing characters I love this much.

Thank you so much for leaving such a lovel review for me! I appreciate it :)

Lauren :)


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