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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
My goodness, now this story is intriguing. Right from the get go I liked your style of writing, not too descriptive but letting the feelings and actions of the people speak. Huh, deep for starting a review, but just go with it. XP You immediately grabs the reader's attention, starting the sections shorter then becoming longer. Excellent formatting, by the way. I love the introduction to each of the characters before bringing them all together. Maybe that's my fondness of the group dynamic coming through, but I really liked it.

Perhaps it's just me, but I'm not so fond of the large cliffhanger at the end of the first chapter. I feel there's so much going on in this chapter anyway, without the added dramatics needed. Though, I understand why you did it as well, but my personal feelings is that it's too much for me.

You have a wonderful way of describing your characters. Normally, when the POV switchers so much it's easy for the reader to get lost, but you managed to control it so props for that! It takes a skilled writer to be able to do that. :)

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story! Oh, and it's not bad and yes you should continue to write it!

- HPB

Author's Response: Hi!

This review made me so, so happy, so before anything else, thank you!

I'm glad to hear that you like the characters, and that the formatting worked for you, because I was slightly anxious about it.

About the cliffhanger... To be honest, I include partly for me as well, seeing as that allows me to get back into writing the story more easily. Not every chapter is going to end with a cliffhanger though (I think), if that helps...

Again, thank you so much for this wonderful review and compliments :)


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