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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, my lovely perfect amazing Sarah. It’s just closing in on midnight, so I can’t promise this review will make the most sense. BUT i am going to try. I’m probably going to squee and flail and huggle, yeah? We’re okay with that? Let’s do this, then!

I just review stalked the others. SEE I told you it was an amazing chapter!!

Oh I feel so sad for Harry. It’s weird, because it’s not like he’s totally dying of pain at losing his uncle, but his feelings are so conflicted. And not knowing what to feel almost seems harder than knowing to feel sad. If that makes sense. I love that he didn’t really turn to Ginny, though. It’s so *Harry* to just need to sulk and live in his own kind of feelings. He isn’t a let someone make things better kind of person. Not even if those things are his feelings. But I don’t know why I am telling you all this, you obviously know. Still I love you for keeping him the same boy JKR created.

Oh my gosh I loved that Ginny wanted to hex Petunia hahaha. I can’t imagine that seeing what Harry went through would be easy, and it isn’t the kind of pain she’d forget that her lover had to go through, and I just loved her little comment. It reminds us of how protective she is over her family ♥

I’ve been trying to avoid quoting my favorite parts, but I just can’t go without this one---
---‘If only the reporters could see you now...’ said Ginny, through a mouthful of toast. ‘Harry Potter: hero of the wizarding world, Senior Auror at the Ministry of Magic, mooing.’

You. Sarah. You’re just the best, you know that? You mix all the right mind of emotions from Harry’s sleepless night to Ginny’s overprotective nature, then turn it all into a seriously giggle worthy sentence.

I loved Harry’s Auror instincts kicking in with the door ajar, the mess still scattered from the paramedics... heheh Harry I KNEW what was coming. I don’t even know what I feel right now. I’m going to keep reading them try and get my feels to make sense.

Ohh no. They still don’t make any sense. My feels, not the chapter.

I just don’t know. I don’t know who I really feel most sorry for. Petunia was truly awful to Harry. She made his life terrible and treated him like he was a terrible thing just for being alive, but she’s so, so sad. She’s alone and lost and UGH. Who is supposed to comfort who in this situation? Harry needs something. He needs to think that they truly regret how they treated him, but at the same time I don’t even know if that would do anything good. I can’t decide if coming was a mistake or not. He probably needed to say some of things he did, but did it just bring all the pain back when it was better blocked out? UGH I can’t decide. But this chapter is so, so amazing and reminds me of why I love Harry so much. He went through more than anyone should have to, and it seems like it. He isn’t this perfect human who rose from the ashes of his life and can forgive all and blah blah. He’s a man that was hurt as a child and really has a hard time forgiving that, and you don’t let any of that die in this story. You keep him a complex character the way he deserves to be.

Okay. I seriously don’t know if one word of this made sense. But this chapter was so amazing and it’s your fault that I don’t make any sense, so there. You’re such an awesome writer, Sarah ♥

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