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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Camille! Iím here with your review, and I got a little too excited when I saw that you requested, as this story is just adorable!

Ooh I liked the beginning of this section; I think it was the part where you mentioned about her brother, as it really intrigued me! Well most of the beginning sections intrigue me, as there always so thought provoking and you want to know why itís like that.

Wah! James was just so cute and adorable! I wanted to ask him out as well. It was really sweet to see how nervous he was, as usually itís the girl in that position, not the guy. It was strange to see how cool Lydia was, and she didnít seem to be stressing out too much. I really like how youíve flipped it on its head, as it makes it more unique and special.

Then Lydia was so forward with him, and you could tell how much she liked him, and I was just yaying for her in my head! I felt so proud that she asked him in, as she is right it was now or never, and Iím glad that she chose the now option. Then another cute scene of them making dinner. Ha James is bad cook, thatís everyoneís excuse!

Again Lydia was really forward here, and I rather liked it as it was nice to see that for a change as I hate those boring OCís who wait for the guy to make the first move. Then more cute scenes of them drinking and playing music. I should stop more cute scenes, as this entire chapter was ridiculously cute, and it made me insanely happy to see that!

Then he was going to hug, and she high fived him instead. Come on Lydia, you said it yourself he was a great man, why refuse to hug him? Then James with the awkward talk about feelings, it fitted in really well with the chapter, and it made me want to hide behind my laptop due to the sheer awkwardness.

Haha then the ending, and everything was saved! More Lydia awesomeness with being forward, and I really like that sheís sort of getting over her commitment issues, as James seems like he wants to commit! Then next chapterís excited me already :D

Another lovely chapter, and it was no problem nominating you, as you really deserved SOTM!

-Kiana!

Author's Response: EEK, you are just amazing. I love your reviews so much. I am so glad you liked the chapter, it took much too long, but I am really proud of it! :) Thanks again!

Camille


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