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Review:Courtney Dark says:

I absolutely love this idea! It's so fresh and original and I just want to read on and I am so annoyed that I don't have more time for reading fanfiction! Sometimes I wish I could just banish real life and live in my little world of fanfiction all day.


This was a brilliant first chapter, as you might have gathered from my little introduction there. I have to admit, the reason I chose to read this story was because of the models you chose to use on your banner (hehe) but I am so glad I have had the opportunity to read this! Darcy seemed like a real cool, unique character, as does Dom. I'm super interested to learn more about their working relationship and friendship. They seem to have more differences than similarities, and I wonder if they'll clash at all...

I really loved the mood of this chapter. It was so light and easy to read and just put a big huge smile on my face. I can't wait to see where this story goes next...all sorts of possibilities are flying through my mind right now!

Thanks for the awesome read. I think I might have to add this to my favourites now, and I will be back for more, as soon as possible.


Author's Response: Thanks, Courtney! When I was writing this, I kept looking around the archive for Witch Weekly stories because the idea didn't feel all that fresh to me. It's great that you feel like it's new and interesting and not like the norm.

Yeah, I chose those models carefully. Nicholas and Troian were in my head basically the whole time, and once you write a story with certain people in mind, you can't really switch it up for the banner, or so it seems to me. I'm really glad you like Darcy so far--writing OCs is so hard for me, and I worry that they'll fall flat. You'll get to know more about her relationship with Dom as the story progresses.

I really don't write fluff or next-gen. Gosh, so much of this story was an experiment for me! It's great to hear that you liked the light tone and felt like it was free and easy. I do hope you'll poke back by and read on at a later time. The next chapter will actually be up today. And thanks for the favorite, too! :)

Thank you for this fabulous review!


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