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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
He was the reason she was feeling like this, he was the reason she wasn't happy, it was all him.

I'm sorry, but I agree with Horatio. It is Freya's fault just as much as it it Louis' and I will not accept him saying otherwise. Since I'm merely an outsider and not a part of this story, I shall leave it to Horatio to smack him on the side of the head.

I said before that I don't like Freya and that's true, kinda. I just don't know what to think of her. It seems obvious that she cares for Louis, but in the long run? I'm kinda thinking she'll listen to her father. And I don't want that to happen, because I really don't like him.

I'm scared for Louis and what will happen if he has to raise the kid alone, but he'll have his family, so I know he'll be okay. I don't want him to lose his baby because of Freya's dad and Freya herself, whether she listens to her father for him or for herself.

So, I'm kinda thinking Louis will or should meet someone else. Because I feel so sad for him now.

But I love that you bring out all these emotions and thoughts in me. I loved this chapter and I love this story. I can't wait for more. :D

Sam.

Author's Response: I agree with Horatio as well, he needs to make Louis see sense, but sadly I think that it'll take a while before Louis realises that it's Freya's fault too. Haha if you want to make an appearance and shake some sense into Louis you are more then welcome to :D

You can hate on Freya, it's okay. She's being very childish through the entire thing so far, and poor Louis is just letting her get away with it as he's worried about upsetting her. Ahh who knows if she'll listen to her father? Well I do... and you do :D

As for Louis, he's going to be so glad that he has his supportive family around, that's all I'm going to say. He'll need them a lot more then he thought soon enough.

Aww all the emotions! They make me so sad :-(

Thank you so reading and reviewing!!

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