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Review:aquabluez17 says:
This was really good too! I loved it :p I wonder what Scott was talking about?

Aww James haha. Maybe adding abit more description to him would have helped :P

Billie? Thts an unusual name :P Some physical details about her could really let the reader get engaged to the story =)

Do continue soon!

Author's Response: You will one day find out what Scott was taling about. He was harsh, but I think he had a valid point.

Billie is an unusual name but I think it suits her character very well.

I know that there is a lack of detail in this, but it's only the prologue and I wanted it to be a little vague and just set up the premise of the story. There will be more details in future chapters!

Thanks for the review :)

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