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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey there, its Gabbie with your requested review and I'm really sorry that its taken me so long to get back to you. I've been really busy and as you may or may not know, I leave for basic training tomorrow so I won't be able to read/review/type for a long time.
*Instantly dies*
I think you might be my last review today, I'm annoyingly busy with things.
Anyway, on to this! I'm really glad that you finally updated for this, as I was wondering what little Devlin might get up to doing next. I wasn't at all surprised that he went through all the trouble of trying to escape. The slyness and cunnning of this boy just stuns me and I think you've really created a complex, engrossing character. Some of his thoughts are just so poignant and dark for a child and I think that might be your point. When he was fighting Harry, I was panicking on the inside because I could sense all of his anger and fear. There's some really vulnerable moments with him too that I simply love, it brings him back down. When he took the picture of himself (Though he won't say that its him) and Emma, I just melted a little. I can see that he really cares about her and making her upset really bothered him, as much as making Alex upset.
I think he's starting to resent Harry a little though, even while he might trust him sometime down the line. Harry may have to accept that his son is gone and live with the child he has but I think that might happen a long ways down the road.
Geoffery was a nice surprise in this chapter, I loved all the emotion and bonding moments that he had with Devlin. I see that he and Sirius don't like one another, I wonder if you'll play around with that more?
His conversation with Devlin about where he belonged adn who he really was just struck a cord with me. And then we get a bit of Snape in this! Ah, I was wondering when he was going to show up! His interaction with Devlin was great and your characterisation was spot on. Hahahhaha.
Can't wait for more of this story, that little bit at the end with Zee was just perfect ,even though Devlin is feeling trapped and out of his own level of control. ;)
That ending though...got me worried and I'm so upset that I won't be able to kep reading this for a while!!! D':
But this is a great story and I think you should coninue on with this for as long as you can, I simply adore it. :)
Thanks for the lovely read.
Much love,
Gabbie :D

Author's Response: Oh no. I was so sad when I read this that I wouldn't see you around for a while. I hope you have "fun" although my boyfriend laughed when I said I was wishing you that ;) He was a Marine.
Thank you so much for the review and I'll be keeping an eye out for your return!


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