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Review:ValWitch21 says:
What have I told you about getting attached? Flirting is not a cure, young lady!

That is the best quote ever.

So much happened in such a short time, hooray! I hope the potion will work properly, and that it won't have any side effects, or that Cho will get into trouble. If she does, at least make her run away with Cedric, just so that my unprobable romance cravings are satisfied, yes?

CHO IS SO SNEAKY. I wonder how long it'll take Miriam to discover Cedric's wand has disappeared from the pantry.

How sad that I have to wait to find out more... Great chapter again, of course!

Author's Response: Haha, I love Miriam, too. She provides some much-needed levity to a really bleak situation.

Well, I won't give away the ending, but obviously the potion is going to be an important part of the remaining chapters. Cho is going to have a lot of pressure on her, in terms of her secret communications with Oliver and her growing affection for Cedric. I don't think she got a fair shake in canon, considering how much she was built up as Harry's dream girl, and so I wanted to give her a chance to really be in the spotlight here. Not that Cedric is one to fall into the shadows...

It's so great that you're already excited to read on. Chapter seven will actually be up on my birthday, which is next Saturday :)

Thanks so much for your lovely review!


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