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Review:Terri says:
This has absolutely been the best piece of fanfiction I have ever come across! So original, and well written, and just freakin awesome. I loved the idea of the many afterlives, and shifting time, and living memories... the Devil's Duel also as a concept was very Hunger Games and super interesting. It's tough to write action adventure, and in so many different perspectives too. The twisted paradise of Cliodna's Clock being undone by a boy like Colin Creevey was supremely satisfying by the way, definitely a top moment. My favourite element though has to be the bit where Fred and George switch - just brilliant. I'm sorry for gushing so much but I can't help myself! Loved loved loved it I hope JK Rowling for whatever reason will read this some day.

Author's Response: Thank you, Terri!! I'm so thrilled you liked this. There's literally millions of fan fiction stories out there, so I don't take it lightly to hear such wonderful compliments.

Action/adventure really is tough to write. I get one chance to paint an image in readers' minds and if I don't segue from one character to another in a fluid way, it will jar readers and become confusing. Colin Creevey ending up being the one to plumb Cliodna's Clock's secrets brings a smile to my face - I always root for the underdogs, the innocent ones.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! And oh my, I think I would be too terrified to have Rowling read this. I can't imagine anyone playing around with my own original characters and it would probably irk her to see what I did to her creations!


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