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Review:nott theodore says:
I want a free cookie! Even an imaginary one! Please???

Anyway, I loved this chapter! It was nice to see Madison back somewhere she feels much more comfortable! And it's good to see her back with her friends, too, and of course, to see her talking to James!

I really love the idea of McGonagall sitting in the headteacher's office and playing secret matchmaker to James and Madison when she decides who to give the Head Boy and Girl to...I wonder if she had any part in the decision on quidditch captains, too?

I hate her father even more now. I can't believe he hit her, and that she has to go back for Christmas. I really hope she finds somewhere else to stay so that she never goes back there. But James was so sweet and he really does care about her. I think she knows that deep down, even though she's trying to avoid the fact, and her dreams are trying to tell her.

Now they're sharing a dorm, I think that James has a chance (as long as he doesn't do something stupid like asking her out again to mess it up). I'm really interested to see how you're going to develop this plotline!

Now, where do I collect my metaphorical cookie...?

Author's Response: I laughed to myself writing about McGonagall, because I just pictured her thinking back to Lily and James and noting the similarities. And nope, Quidditch captains was all Longbottom, so even the slightly clueless Herbology teacher is in on this arrangement. :)

Madison's definitely starting to deal with some conflicting emotions, and I need to stop typing stuff like this because I keep getting thisclose to giving away the future plot.

Thanks for the review!

-ShadowRose


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