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Review:nott theodore says:
There wasn't a lot happening in this chapter, but I think you really managed to show how isolated and sad Madison feels at home. And it's no wonder, with a mother like that. Why couldn't she just congratulate her for getting head girl?! I can't believe she put Madison on a diet, as well! It's ridiculous, but I'm worried she's going to end up with some sort of eating disorder, being put on a diet and with the amount of exercise she's doing.

I liked the way we found out that Madison and James are co-quidditch captains though! That's going to make for some very interesting scenes in the future!

I've noticed a few grammatical errors and some Americanisms in this story so far, but I wanted to tell you that I actually really like your writing style. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Once again, we prove how little heart Madison's mother really has.

And yes, there are some fun Quidditch scenes in the future.

Yay, I'm glad you like my writing style! Also, in the future, feel free to point out any errors or Americanisms if you think of them, because I'd like for this story to be as polished as possible!

Thanks for reviewing!

-ShadowRose


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