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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello again!

Madison's parents are absolutely horrible! Ugh! I feel so sorry for her!

Her mum is just a *insert non 12+ word here*. I can't believe that the only thing she can even be bothered to say to her daughters are insults about her appearance. From the sound of it Madison is really pretty and not in the slightest bit fat, but obviously she is going to have serious self-esteem problems in the future if she has had years of her mother saying that sort of thing to her. It'll be interesting to see how that affects her in the future.

I never liked Marcus Flint, and this chapter hasn't improved my opinion of him. Although if his hangover-phase is his most pleasant state, I hate to think what he will be like in any of his other phases.

Also, this is a bit random and should probably have come at the beginning of this review (sorry if the order is very confusing, I'm trying to stop my fingers from typing the same random way my mind thinks!) but I like your title, too.

Anyway, I'm still enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yup, Madison's mother has kind of distorted her self-image. And yeah, her father's not the nicest character. He hasn't changed in the slightest since his Hogwarts years.

Yay! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!


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