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Review:nott theodore says:
I agree with Madison. I don't like mornings either. Not that that's relevant, but I thought I'd voice my agreement with her anyway.

Moving on... I liked the change in the point of view in this chapter. We already know what James' feelings are for Madison, so it's nice to see her point of view. I think it will be interesting to see how her feelings develop (I'm guessing they're going to, after THE DREAM) and to see more of her character.

I don't like Madison's parents already and we haven't even met them yet. But I'm guessing the comments about Madison's appearance come from her mother and she's repeating them to herself, which already makes me think she's horrible. And I never liked Marcus Flint anyway. I'm feeling sorry for her having to go home this summer, so I hope there's going to be something that makes it a bit better for her.

Also, I like Madison's character even more now. And agree with her about the fact that it's creepy James won the Witch Weekly award when he was eleven (I thought that when I read the prologue, too, but forgot to mention it). She seems pretty cool. Her response to being asked out again was probably my favourite bit.

And the dream. THE DREAM! I couldn't not mention it, because it was really sweet. And kind of embarrassing for her, too, I guess. But I'm looking forward to whatever's going to happen next!

Author's Response: Well, that makes three of us. Mornings are not my strong suit, unless copious amounts of caffeine are involved. :)

As you probably noticed in the next chapters, you were absolutely right about Madison's mother. It's almost hard to write human beings that horrible.

Various dreams do end up playing a very important role in this novel, so this is only the beginning.

I'm so happy you've liked it so far!

-ShadowRose


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