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Review:nott theodore says:

I saw your story had been updated recently and I thought I'd start reading! I love James II/OC stories and so far this one is very promising.

It actually made me laugh - the Potter males don't have the best of luck when it comes to asking out girls, do they? I like the idea that it's carried onto the next generation, too, because in most next gen stories, James is amazingly confident and arrogant and always gets the girl he wants. Plus, Madison's character seems pretty cool. That outburst only came from a third year, so I can't wait to see what responses she'll come up with in the future!

Anyway, I'm enjoying this so far and I'm on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it so far! I always love hearing that my story made someone laugh - but yes, the Potter lineage seems to have a little trouble in the female department... First James, then Harry (oh goodness, Goblet of Fire anyone?), and now James II. And probably Albus too, because I always envision him as incredibly awkward. And nope, James isn't perfect. I like it that way. I'm glad you like Madison as well, she's a fun one to write. Thanks!

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