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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oooh, I liked it! And that twist at the end was very nice. I'm quite glad that James Potter is in a different Quidditch team and that Puddlemere United has a cast of original characters rather than canon one, because it gives you a lot more room to explore. However, I am looking forward to seeing what Oliver does about this new situation. I'm hoping for some drama, personally. I'm also wondering whether Harry and/or James will be introduced to this story...I'm not so secretly hoping so!

Aw, it was so like the Oliver I remember, getting the team up at six in the morning...and I love the fact that he woke Pippa up even earlier, just to ensure she'd be there on time. I am loving Pippa more and more, by the way. And the part about Oliver's old Quidditch pitch model brought a huge goofy grin to my face. It's details like that which makes me want to go and re-read the Harry Potter books all over again.

I don't really have any CC's for this chapter, to tell you the truth. Perhaps a little more description and imagery would be nice, especially between the dialogue but that's just me nitpicking.

Great chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Yes, my poor original characters have been subject to much abuse, or as you put it 'exploring', because I really didn't want to make this about one of the Weasley/Potters children, but something a bit, well I suppose different! Don't worry though, Harry and James will be making an appearance at some stage (the former maybe sooner than later!)

There will be drama, and plenty of loyalty, don't you worry!

I love Pippa too! I think she is so fun to write because she is just so zany and scatty, and to be honest, even I haven't figured out who she is yet! So that should be fun to work out!

I always loved Oliver and his slightly manical way of doing things, so your not alone amongst the Wood lovers :)

Ahh yes, the description. That really is my downfall, and something I seriously need to work on!

Thank you for the wonderful review :D


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