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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Heya!

So, this was a pretty short chapter but I liked it, nevertheless. I always enjoy reading about Dom in fan fiction, and so I am very much looking forward to meeting her. From what I can see (mainly from Dom's letter) she looks like she's going to be an awesome character - very lively and bubbly. I'm eager to see how she and Flick will interact. And if Dom's personality will bring out any traits in Flick we didn't know she had.

I'm also looking forward to the moment that she tells her friends about the kids - I really want to see what their reactions will be, especially from Albus.

I also enjoyed the conversation Flick had with Tessa about houses. I liked her comment about not being a Gryffindor, because she couldn't even tell Albus she was pregnant. I hope we'll get to see some more of her Slytherin characteristics coming through...I wonder what house Tessa will be in.

This was a very nice, fluffy little chapter. It was a little fillery but some filler is always nice once in a while. Keep up the good writing!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi,

I LOVE Dom and there never seems to be enough of her!!! Dom certainly is a live one and a bit of a wild child.

Ohh their reactions, I can't wait either and writing the story :)

Thanks once again

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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