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Review:radicallyali says:
ďNo. You donít get to talk.Ē
Well then. Better watch out, James.

On the other hand, at least I knew Averyís jealousy was still intact.
I just smacked my hand to my face. Oh James. What are we ever going to do with you.

I feel like pygmy puffs would roll everywhere if they got really excited. Like
I can just imagine Victoria just rolling all over Jamesí room.

That of a cat. An orange cat. A male, orange cat.
James would notice that he is a male cat. Sometimes I think James just has this ridiculous Napoleon type complex.

Fitted sheets were the worst.
Folding those things is an absolute monster I canít stand it.

I assumed it was because he didnít trust himself not to hit me.
Same Freddie, same.

Ex Avery.

Has Cooper Bradley had a chappie image yet? If not, then his character face needs to be Bradley Cooper.

ďYou mind your own business.Ē
Smart girl, Ali.

ďLetís just hope you remember the next day.Ē
This will be fun to read. Hehehe.


I almost forgot about Meta I hope she shows up at the tournament or soon because oh man was she fun to hate.

I just got all giddy that James ran into his first captain.

The other two guys were just sort of standing there like spares.

I choked.
More sad faces =[

Why were there responsible people around?
Those responsible people are always bringing you down, James.

I was not going to live my life as a Hufflepuff.
Hey now.

three of which were made up
I just straight up cackled and my youngest sister just gave me the dirtiest look.

I like Artemis.

10-0 Gryffindor. Whoops. Tornados.
I feel like James is going to have this huge inability to let go of his captaincy at Hogwarts and itís eventually going to hold him back from being a better player and itís going to be a big obstacle for him to overcome. At some point James is going to have to move on from Hogwarts, as hard as itís going to be for him.

I love how well Ali already knows James. I feel like she has her own James in her past.

Someone who isnít James gets punched? My bets are on Bink cause sometimes heís a right prick.

I feel like things are really starting to speed up now and Iím excited for the next chapter as always.


Ps this review is almost 450 words long BOOYA

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James is just ... well, there are no accurate words.

Omg Victoria just rolling around. Like a hamster ball but a ball of fluff.

You're very right. TomCat is a THREAT.

I love how irritated Freddie is about the situation.

He hasn't had a chpater image. And yes, I think I've decided on that as well.

GROWN UP BABIES. The visual makes me giggle though.

James is such a fanboy. I can't even.

Poor choking James.

James doesn't like responsible people. They're buzz kills.


It will definitely take a while for James to move on from what he knows so well. It'll be very interesting to explore.

I like Ali and yes, she has met several people like James throughout her years. She's a great friend.

Bink would be a good guess. I suppose we'll see how accurate it is.

Yus. Tis speeding up. Now that I have the foundation down.

Thanks :)

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