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Review:fauxthefox says:
I'd like to start by saying that I have a crush on Louis. Like when he opens to door in low-strung pajama bottoms. Heeyy there...

Now, ahem, important stuff.

I liked Frankie a lot in the opening of the chapter, and I think the beginning was very strong in terms of characterization and description - but I feel like after the first scene in his apartment, we don't really get much about him. I'm curious to get to know Frankie better.

After the first scene, I think the chapter could definitely benefit from some more description (maybe of Frankie's workplace or of the infamously gorgeous Healer Sean?)

The Frankie/Louis relationship is already very engaging, and I want to read more!
10/10
Faux

Author's Response: Haha! Crush on Louis all you want, I'm sure he'd love it. :D

You'll know Frankie a lot more as the story progresses; he's not one to talk about himself and everything that's happened because he thinks his life is crap, but the boy is learning. :)

More of Sean, too. :D

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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