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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello!

I really enjoyed this one-shot! It was an excellent fill in for a missing moment in the books.

I thought your characterisation of Neville, Ginny and Luna were spot on. The beginning part with Ginny lecturing Neville in particular was great. I just loved it when Neville stood up to Snape though haha! His line was perfect. The explanation as to why Luna had the sleeping draught was great too! It was believable and just felt very Luna.

There were a couple of typos and you seem to change from Neville's POV to Ginny's POV in the middle of the story which was a little strange but neither take away from what a great story this is!

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

Lauren

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