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Review:FallenAmaranth says:
Heya! I'm glad you managed to get a super awesome banner (better than mine would have been) xD

Aditi, Aditi, Aditi. This is fantastic! I mean, you know I love Dominique, and you'd written her perfectly, and I'm glad you wrote her as a Ravenclaw, I think Fleur would have been if she were a Hogwartian. As for her personality, I think you had her fears spot on - seeing scars on her father's face everyday that were caused by a werewolf would most likely heighten the fear, since you get to see what they can do in first person.

Cannock Chase Forest was an unusual place to choose; it actually sounds pretty magical tbh and I liked it, it's different :D

I did wonder whether or not she should have just apparated out of the forest and then back again in the morning, or just put charms around the hut and stay there, but I have to say, this ending is far better than her chilling out on her own :P Is it weird that I attempted to talk her out of it in my head? Probably.

However, there is an upside to her being bitten - I'm pretty sure she could write an amazing article about werewolves that would be so fantastic that some readers might think that she was a werewolf herself! Wouldn't that be a laugh.

As well as liking Dom, did I ever mention that I am a H-U-G-E fan of wolves and werewolves?

New fave story or what? xD

~ Emily

Author's Response: hey! thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

I am glad I could get a nice banner too, thanks.

Aww I am pleased that you find this good, and that you think I've written Dominique well. I should warn you, she's going to get a little dramatic in the next chapter though ;) I am relieved to hear that you found the fears justified too.

To be honest, I did a little bit of research. I googled some werewolf sighting stuff and there was an article about rumours of werewolves being in Cannock Chase Forest, so I went with that xD

Haha Dominique is not the kind of person who'd rather stay inside and stuff, she'd want to go home! Haha it is not weird at all, I order around characters to do stuff in my head all the time.

Haha yes she could. We'll see how this affects her work in the later chapters.

Aw thanks so much for your kind words! It would be great if you could give your views on chapter 2 as well!

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