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Review:GS says:
Hi! that was really good but I kinda expected a more different scene!! No one made a single comment about how James was the centre of the task! I was sure her brothers at least would have brought it up. I also didn't expect her fear to be known as betrayal. I thought it was more of a fear of hurting those she loved..but in retrospect that does seem like a form of betraying her friends! Is the ridikulus spell working going to be a major part of the plot line from now on in, or is it kind of a side story??

As an afterthought, more James's fear of monsters seems kinda superficial when you compare it to Halle's doesn't it?? :P

Halle as way crazier then usual in this chapter, it was kinda bordering on overboard but it was fun to read! :)

Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter!!

Thanks!!

Author's Response: wow, a long review! this is exciting :D
thankyouu, and yeah i had to have a chapter which dealt with the aftermath of the task, so it was a bit dull :/ the spell is gonna be a side-plot i reckon, probably just something to let Al steal the show (:
i love writing crazy (coz thats what i am) but i'll try and tone it down (:
NEXT CHAPPIES ALREADY IN THE QUEUE. I KNOW. APPLAUD ME.
THANKS FOR REVIEWING :D


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