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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hey, I'm here from the review battle :)
I love the Weasleys and fics centered around the red headed clan :)

I think it's really sweet what Arthur's trying to do for Molly even though she doesn't 100% trust him with their unruly boys.

The way Molly was thinking about Arthur looking after the boys, I thought she felt like he was just as bad as them and that really it was seven children not six lol.

What with Fred and George involved, I'm in agreement with Molly, I'm surprised the house stayed standing with them involved.

It made me smile about Ron and his teddy bear 'fluffykins'. I'm guessing this might have been the teddy that was turned into a spider.

It was really nice of Arthur to offer to clean the house, although I bet the children thought it was going to be something more fun/exciting. I know I would :D

I think because the Weasley's are so well known it can be tricky to write them but I think you done an excellent job!!

And the characterisation was perfect, especially the children. Ron was just adorable, especially with his teddy. Although most one year olds can't say proper words such as 'food' or 'what's doing' more like a lot of nonsense and the odd 'mama' or 'dada'.

Fred and George, trouble makers before they even start Hogwarts. Bill and Charlie were perfect, considering you had pretty much a free reign on them as we don't know alot about them.

Even though Percy is older than Charlie I can relate slightly to the telling off older sibling and the telling tales. Since I'm was guilty of both whe I was younger *whoops* It made Percy even more Percy like :)

"little pieces it would be impossible to put together" - All I could think about was Hermione yelling at Harry about being a wizard. Would the reparo spell still work if Arthur managed to find his wand?

The only thing I would say is that Ginny's real name is Ginevra not Virginia. But apart from that I loved it!!!

This was really good, poor old Arthur, bless him. At least Molly did manage to have a little rest before having to restor peace to the busy house.

It flowed really well and I didn't see any mistakes. Well done you and well done Arthur :)

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the sweet review - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

About the Ginevra/Virginia thing, at this stage Molly and Arthur were just considering names for Ginny...my head canon is that they liked the nickname Ginny, but not Virginia. But that's just my take.

Courtney:)

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