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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I liked this one-shot. :) The memories Harry, Hermione, and Ron listed of all the things they didn't want to forget gave me a pang of nostalgia and made me want to pick up the books and read them again. I'm rereading Goblet of Fire at the moment so I'll probably read a chapter of that before bed just because of this.

There are so many things the trio saw and experienced that not many other kids could have dreamed of - the good along with the bad. It's nice that they had the foresight to write all of it down before some memories slipped through the cracks and became forgotten. Even though some of the worse memories creep into his dreams, it's better that he tackles them head-on rather than bottles them up like Hermione advised against. She's very wise, that Hermione.

The description of having a nice day outside with his family - the family he'd always wanted but never got to have growing up - was very touching. I liked how James was zooming around on a broom, too; he's already just like his namesake. ;)

I can't imagine writing a story in a non-native language, and have tremendous admiration for those who can do it. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It means a lot to me that you took time to write such a kind and long review.
Exactly, I like the idea of them taking time to remember all the good things, bad things, people and so on.
Thank you again! I'm so happy that Harry ended up having a loving family and loyal friends he could rely on which is one of the things I tried to show with this little story.
It takes a lot of time, but I feel like I'm improving my English and learning a lot while writing so it is worth it.
I have heaps of ideas but almost no time but I'll definitely keep writing!
Thank you again again for the review and sorry it took me a while to answer, I hadn't seen it before now :) :)


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