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Review:Celtic_Dreamer7 says:
I like this. I don't normally read Maurader's era stories, but I really enjoyed this. I've always been curious about Regulas and his back story. You've written this so well, it sounds like it should be a companion to the books. Your descriptions are awesome. They really paint a great picture in the reader's mind. It compels the reader to continue.

I love the difference you show between the two brothers and how their parent's treated them, even the house elves. You've did a wonderful job with this. Congrats!

~Celtic~

Author's Response: Hey Celtic, nice to see you here! :)

I'm so pleased to hear that you enjoyed this first chapter despite not normally being a Marauders' era fan. I agree that Regulus is really interesting, and I've had a lot of fun so far in exploring his character for this story. It's great that you liked the descriptions and felt like this fit in okay with what we know from canon.

I'm also happy to hear that you liked the Black family dynamic. I didn't want them to be yelling and screaming at each other, but I definitely wanted to convey that there is a tension between Sirius and his parents and an obvious favoritism for Regulus. Regulus's relationship with Sirius will continue to be important as the story progresses. I hope you continue on later and see more of what I've done with Regulus--I'd love to get your feedback.

Thanks for this really lovely review!

-Amanda


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