Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:alicia and anne says:
OKay your descriptions are amazing, I've got chills, you've written brilliantly.
It's so sad how you've described everything through Fleurs eyes, and having it written so we are the one who is Fleur in the story is amazing, it really hits you how it's all happening in the story and it is so heartwrenching. To see Tonks and Remus and poor Fred and feeling as though it is you going through all of this to see them, makes this so brilliantly written. You are amazing for writing this powerful and amazing one shot. Seriously it's amazing!
Fleur is amazing in this story, really truly amazing, it's great to see what she done through the war and how she is there for her family.
I really loved that Fleur would give herself up to Greyback to save the girl and that she knew how to hurt him, poor Bill's pain though and his offering himself to Greyback so Greyback could finish what he started was so sad. There were so many points in this that I just wanted to cry.
You are such a talented writer.

Author's Response: Hi m'dear!!

I am so happy you enjoyed this. Showing Fleur as the woman brave enough to compete in the tri wizard tournament, instead of the air head that I see a lot of fan fiction's do, was really fun for me. I think that she's such a complex character, and I loved getting to play with her reaction in second person.

Thank you so much for all your awesome compliments and just making my day with this review ♥ I'm really happy you enjoyed this!

Jami


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 429
Submit Report: