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Review:alicia and anne says:
Okay, I really thought that this was about James and Lily, until the end! But wow! That is a very good twist that I did not see coming. I really like how you've drawn the parallels between the two, and having them both seeming to be going through the same kind of things.
I really like that Draco was racing around on a broomstick at a young age, the same as what Harry had done.
That is really brilliant how you managed to do that, and in 500 words! That right there is very impressive. I was thinking that maybe they (when I still thought it was Lily and James) were talking about Dumbledore, but it's obvious now that it's Lucius and Narcissa, it's great that with the simple change of one name at the end, it could be a completely different story.
That was amazing!

Author's Response: I'm so happy I tricked you with this! hehe!

I stated this with the idea of writing about James and Lily until I realized how well it would have worked for Lucius and Narcissa. It's odd thinking about how, at once, they were at similar sort of crossroads, isn't it?

Thank you so much for stopping by, miss Snaky! Good luck to Slytherin ;)

♥ Jami

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