Ahem. . . .hello there!
You may remember entering this in 'The Sequel Challenge' eons ago, and being promised a review. . .well this is the (very late) review!
I am so sorry it took so long! Apologies!
Aaaanyway, onto this!
The beginning is relatively normal, you know, two girls going getting mani-pedi's, very run-of-the-mill stuff, then Ellie announces there is a party, and my curiosity is aroused.
Why is Ellie holding a party? Don't people usually invite people beforehand, instead of just announcing 'I'm throwing a party, see you there!'
But nonetheless, I went along with it.
I knew something was up when they went to get their hair done. I mean, I know Ellie and Phoebe are best friends, but still, people make arrangements when they do stuff like this!
I was still clueless when they blindfolded her, but as I said above, I went along with it. I was completely oblivious as to what was going on, until she mentions the dress was long and heavy. And then:
OH MY GOOD GOD! SHE'S GETTING MARRIED!
After that, came a lot of screamin and flapping of hands. So now my neighbours thinks I'm crazy. . . .
Anyway! This was brilliant! 10/10 for mystery and sequel-ness! :D
And again, sorry it took so long!
Author's Response: Hello! Don't worry about the lateness, there was never any rush. :)
(Also, I apologise for my slow response - real life is mean sometimes).
Ellie's a bit of a wacko, literally. She is the signature crazy friend that we all have. :p
Phoebe has known her for ~thirteen years, she just goes with it by now. ;)
ahahaha the blindfolding is a reference to Blossoming! I don't know if you ended up reading it, but in one chapter Louis blindfolds Phoebe, so that was a small sneaky hint that Louis was up to something again. :'D
ahahahahaha I'm SO glad it came as a shock, I don't think anyone actually guessed what was going to happen ahaha. :p
I flap my hands all the time when I'm excited, my family just rolls with it now. My neighbours never leave the house so they probably wouldn't see me if I did cartwheels in a nun outfit (not that I do, it's nearly midnight and it's been a long week) and this has just turned into a bit of random mush now.
Thanks for the lovely review, you're far too kind! ♥