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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hello again, Here for the review battle :)

I really like Emily and in this chapter your able to see more of her personality and how all she wants is to make her mother proud.

I think this chapter was well written, especially the begining. I could relate to some of the stuff Emily was saying which made me like it even more.

Out of curiosity why does Emily have Lavender's last name. Surely she would have her fathers? I'm intrigued as to who her father is and why she hasn't got his last name. Is her father canon or an OC of yours, or are you leaving it a mystery for now??

"I'm getting tired of sitting here…and I'm hungry" - I thought this line really made Emily seem more real especially since she's thinking like any normal teen :)

The last sentence made me feel a little sad for Emily, does Lavender blame her for her sister's death even though she tells her she doesn't? Hopefully she will make Lavender proud of her.

I really like this story and Emily's character. It'll be interesting to see how her and James' relationship plays out.

Definitely adding this to my favs :D

-Potterfan310
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