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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is a brilliant chapter - scary, tense and totally awesome! The details of Rose's thoughts and observations makes this chapter so realistic and quirky - as well as the different settings which help keep the chapter exciting.

You build the suspense brilliantly through the range of sentences, Rose's thoughts drifting to snippets about the past and her dreams, and the contrast to the action and motion. It was lovely the way you wrote them as younger rather than sixteen or whatever - everybody can empathise with them then, and it makes them much more adventurous and innocent.

Overall, a fabulous read which I enjoyed thoroughly, and an awesome cliff hanger at the end :D

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm not used to writing this genre so it means a lot :)

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