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Review:Bobby Dazzler says:
Hey Aph, how're you going? Here to give ya some love for the BvB battle :)

So, this is not what I was expecting!!! I think I only glimpsed the "characters" before going ahead and clicking on the link for the first chapter and as a result I spent the majority of it until Victorie was mentioned thinking it was Molly Weasley (Ron's mum...) and was going to correct you and say that wasn't her maiden name at school, as it had me very confused until that point (seeing how I'm sure I saw Andromeda and Bellatrix in it), but ah well, clearly been attacked by baby brain and will therefore shut up lol. Sorry about that.

So, I'm starting to think, now that I've read everything and it's making a bit more sense to me being a next-gen than mauraders (lol), that it could be a type of time travel fic, explaining the "her" in Molly Weasley (JR's, lol...) head, and I am keen to find out. Very mysterious. Is it like Tom Riddle's Diary kind of situation where Molly talked to someone from the past like that? Keen to find out.

Will admit, it's been a LONG time since I've read a story in 2nd person, but you carried it through beautifully and it didn't drag. On the contrary, it read seemlessly and "fast", if that made sense? Yes there was a lot of description (at times, a little too much towards the beginning? Some sentences I had to re-read - could also be from being tired...) but for the most part it didn't drag the flow of the story down at all, and the plot is very interesting already, very mysterious.

I am very interested to find out who the "her" is, and how she came into being. Very sinister, love it! Will definitely read more (after a nap I think, hehe!) Bobby xx

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

Haha, yeah, the problem with having a Molly Weasley in Marauders Era and a Molly Weasley in Next Gen is they can be so easily confused! And there are Andromeda and Bellatrix in the character list, so you're not going totally mad, don't worry ;)

It is a kind of time travel fic, in a way, and it is like Tom Riddle's diary situation, so there is a part of the past and there is a sort of voice involved... but yeah, it's confusing because of the two eras kinda conflating (which happens more in later chapters!).

Thank you! :) This was a real challenge for me, since it's the first thing I've ever written in 2nd person, so it was a little unusual and I'm kinda discovering it as I go along, so I'm so glad you like it! Yeah, there is quite a lot of description - I should probably go through and cut some of it down, so thank you for mentioning it! :)

Gah, thank you so much for the lovely review, and for stopping by! :)

Aph xx

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