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Review:missclaire17 says:
this would make a very interesting novella or novel (:
I have to say, I didn't expect the one-shot to turn out this way when I first read the summary. I thought it would be something fluffy and cute but it wasn't.
I liked its sensuality and how Raoul and Lucy have a complicated relationship. the fact that Raoul stated in front of everyone that Lucy was his girlfriend was rather interesting and I'd love to know more about why Lucy reacted the way she did to his announcement. Because Lucy did want what he did, but the fact that she was left feeling so weird about it is intriguing.

It would make a very nice novella or novel, if you ever reconsider lengthening this (:

Author's Response: Hey Claire!

Im glad you liked this! I was thinking of doing that myself you know! ;P I'll prob rant to you bout a plot and make you nit pick every little detail you like and don't like before I write it though so be prepared ahaha

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