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Review:soapman333 says:
I'm back because you (for some odd reason) re-requested me :D!

So, the beginning of this chapter just cracks me up. I know it's just one line, but the part where her ponytail is flying in the wind as she travels in a small boat to the castle created this image in my mind that had me choking on my coffee.

Your description of McGonagall is just perfect and your description of the setting, in general, is just very well put together. Your word choice really allowed me to picture what's going on in my wee brain.

Oooo you actually wrote a song for the hat to sing? I know this is another minor detail, but it such a nice add in to the story.

I'm going to make a guess as to why Bri's at Hogwarts, and I want you to tell me whether or not I'm correct. I'm assuming her mother died. Eh? Did I guess right? Are you proud of me?! She doesn't want to talk about it, so it's either that, or her mum's seriously ill.

This chapter was a nice read. A hint of sad things to come, but mostly just an introduction to Bri's new world. I can't wait until she meets those twins! Oh, and I like how this story follows the Prisoner of Azkaban so well.

Jack

Author's Response: Hi!

xD Yeah, I'd like to bring a mixture of humour and sadness in this story, so it's not all fun and games or misery :)

Aw, thanks about saying my McGonagall is good, she's really difficult to write in my opinion. Glad she comes off well. Also difficult is writing a Sorting Hat song! That's why I only wrote one verse, it's hard xD

You are correcto, her mother has recently passed. You get one cookie point! xD

Thank you kindly for the review!


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