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Review:soapman333 says:
Wow, what an intriguing start.

Hello, I'm here for the review request :)

The narrative was quite smooth and very humorous. I see a lot of potential in both this story and your writing!

Now on to your characters:

Poor Laila, I feel for her :/ being an outcast at the school does not sound like a trip to a park.

Her mother isn't Astoria? Wow, this part really intrigued me. This just flares my wee curiosity friend that sits around on my lap, waiting for me to read mystery stories (That didn't make sense...I'm running off of coffee at this moment).

I think the part that really caught my attention (and I know it's just a small detail in your work) is where you mentioned that Gryffindors have too much pride to ridicule her, so they just ignore her. I don't know why I like this part so much...it just a unique aspect to your story!

Now, I hope this review wasn't complete rubbish,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hi :D

Intriguing? I have a wee friend as well named ego and you just fed him and, err, made him really fat. Yeah, we'll go with that . . . MOVING ON.

I love seeing people's reaction to the whole Astoria's not her mom thing because it honestly wasn't terribly jaw dropping to me when I wrote it. (but I must've thought so at the time because of the bird comment -.-)

As for the Gryffindor thing, I just don't think they're bullies even though many fanfic writers write them as such. But it's nice to see that you find that interesting :) There'll be more of that pride showing up later!

Thank you for this totally non rubbish review love! xx

-Sankavi ^_^


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