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Review:soapman333 says:
Hey, it me, soapman333 :D!

What an interesting one-shot. I completely agree with what you have written. I thoroughly think that Voldemort didn't care for blood supremacy, but he was using the political dispute to gain power.

Not a lot of words, but each word is full of impact. The whole scene you've created seems to only be about five minutes, and within that five minutes you've managed to capture the essence of this man.

The fact that he is depicted so inhumanely really speaks volumes. The tone of the work as a whole was really dark and made me shiver.

Hmm, I liked the unique perspective, but I would have liked a little more, but, eh, it was an interesting read nonetheless.

Thanks for sending me this story, I hope my review helped :D

soapman333

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you for the nice words! :)

I'm really happy to know that you like my potrayal of Voldemort and that you think that I've managed to capture the essence of him, because he is a hard character to write and he's complex. I definetly agree that Voldemort was using the political dispute to gain power. I think all that mattered to him was revenge, power and eternal life, not that much the blood status.

It is also really nice to know that you think that every word is full of impact, even thought the story is really short and that the tone of the fanfiction made you shiver. My aim was it to be dark and I'm happy that you think that I've managed to do it.

I know that the story could have been better, but I'm really busy at school, so I did this fanfiction probably for a couple of hours and I couldn't managed to do it the way I wished...

However, I'm glad that you think that this one-shot is unique and interesting! :)

Thanks for this lovely review - it was really helpful!

Yours,
Kristen


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