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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hi there! Thanks so much for entering my challenge, and I'm so glad to finally get around to reading this piece of spectacular writing.

The emotions in this one-shot were so raw and believable, I actually found my eyes tearing up a little bit-I do seem to be in a peculiarly emotional mood today. I start crying as soon as sad music starts playing on my favourite TV shows. Anyway, I've never really read anything that focuses so much more on emotion than character and I actually really like it. And I like the fact that we don't find out the name of your main character...that he remains faceless, in a sense.

The way you alternated between the past and present was fantastic, and really added another layer of depth to the story...and made the effects of the Cruciatus Curse seem even more horrible and horrifying. I thought the aunt was a great addition to the story-I especially liked the idea of the vein in her forehead pulsing, to portray anger.

Overall I thought this was an amazing one-shot-you should definitely be proud, and I am so grateful I got the chance to read it.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

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