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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hello again!

Okay, so this was a pretty interesting chapter in which we found out a lot of information about Flick's back story, which was very nice to see. It really makes her seem like a much more realistic character and I always like to read about large families that have a few problems, so I like the fact the Flick's mother left them when they were young. I wonder if we'll get to meet her later in the story? And if so, I wonder what she will be like-she certainly doesn't seem like a particularly good mother. And the fact that she doesn't even know about her father's death is horrible-I thought that was a nice touch to the chapter.

I don't know why but, in a way, Flick's family sort of reminds me of the Weasley's. I think it might be the slightly chaotic atmosphere which surrounds them, which I really like. Ria and Flick seem very close, and I liked the snatches and glimpses of the other family members we were given in this chapter.

I personally feel that Flick's reaction to finding out Albus supposedly has a girlfriend was a little over the top, which I guess suggests that she still has feelings for him. It will be interesting to see how all that plays out.

I don't really have any mega CC's for this chapter, apart from a few spelling and grammar errors which I would suggest going back over and a few random comma splices. But overall, I liked the chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hello Again :D

I can't say too much because spoilers but lets just say Flick gets quite a shock ;)

I never though of it like that before, especially since Flick's family isn't as big as the Weasleys but I guess in ways they're just as chaotic.

Flick can be a little dramatic at times but like you said, she may still have feelings of sorts for him. Especially since he is Bentley and Aubri's daddy.

Reading through it I noticed them, so I'll make sure to change them.

Thank you once again!!!
-Potterfan310
Soph x


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