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Review:potterfan310 says:
Where can I find a guy like Al, one that calls you a princess even though your hormonal, stressed and angry??

Al is such a sweetie!!!

Sorry to be picky but I spotted these errors -
"She had waked him up as Aurora had been waked up by her prince" - Perhaps change 'waked' to 'woken' so it reads better.

"Blake, out she" - Need to change O to B

"Arnav asked" - Is that supposed to be Albus??

"since the morning" - Add an 's' to morning so it becomes mornings

Al is such a grouch in the mornings, then again I'm not much fun in the morning either :D

His niece and nephew are so adorable!

9/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Oh my god. Im so sorry!! yeah its supposed to Al!! ugh god. Sorry!! I was talking to someone and I just wrote down their name! God thts so sad haha. SORRYY!!

Thank you for leaving a review! I fixed all of the places you mentioned (thank you once again for tht) =)

aww im glad you like it!! yay haha :P

Thanks so much for the review =)


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